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> Legends of Kirby, Epic story
 Posted: June 16, 2009 06:20 pm
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Yeaaaa there might be a delay if u don't c it then tomorrow 4 sure it will be up thx 4 ur cooperation.

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 Posted: June 30, 2009 04:04 pm
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Alright it took several months to finally get myself to finish the long awaited Ch.9....enjoy ppl


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 Posted: June 30, 2009 04:08 pm
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Ch.9 The Return of Organization XIII's Number VI and VIII

*SSK,Marth,Sonic and Link have left "Halloween Town".Now they're about 15 miles from the next town.*
SSK"Thank God we took a nap!!I would never make it even the next mile,I would probably faint!"
Rest"Same here."
Link"I'm still walking when i was in monster form >.>"
Marth"I feel like tentacles is still choking me. >.< "
Sonic"Smell that"
SSK"Lunch."
*All there stomachs growl*
Link"Hey,Marth how much money do we hv?"
Marth"Let's see...3,750 dollars."
Sonic"That's...a lot!"
SSK"Well let's eat then!"
*1 hr.45 min later*
Link"Awww.... that was good."
Marth"Yea,but we still have 13 miles to go."
Rest"AWWW!!!"
SSK"Well better get moving..."
*3hrs.45min later*
SSK"OH...MY....GOD!! A HOTEL!!!"
Link"Last one there is an idiot!"
Sonic"Your on Link!!"
*Sonic is in the lead...now Marth....Sonic again...Link...SSK...Sonic...Marth reaches it first..Sonic...Link...and SSK came last.*
Link"SSK's the idiot!!"
SSK"SHUT UP!! >:( "
Marth"What town is this?
SSK"Uuhhh.......Kiershtagd."
Link"NOO its...Kaierz`e!!!"
Sonic"Link's right."
Marth"Well got our rooms."
Link"Seperate?"
Marth"Figured u'd say that so I did,plus our rooms have a spa!!!"
Rest"SWEET!!!"
SSK"Upstairs?"
Marth"Yea."
Sonic"Let's go!!"
Marth"Oh for the love of....only my room has a spa!!!"
Guys"WHAT!!!"
Link"*sighs*Let's go."
*20min later all have setup there rooms*
*Marth and rest are in the spa.*
Link"Haaaa...this feel good..."
SSK"Yea..."
Sonic"Right amount of heat."
Marth"Needs to bubble."
*Turns knob*
Marth"That's better."
Link"Turn on the tv for the lottery...I purchased a ticket."
Rest O_o "How'd u get 1?!"
Link"No age requirement."
*Lady on tv announcing #s*
"21"
Link"21"
LAdy"31"
Link"31"
Lady"54"
Link"54"
Lady"46"
Link"46"
LAdy"19"
Link"19!!!WHAT'S THE BONUS BALL?!?!?!?!"
Lady"6"
Link"6!!!I WON THE JACKPOT!!!....180,000,000 DOLLARS!!!
Rest"ALRIGHT!!!"
Link"How much money can the wallet hold?"
Marth"1 Billion."
Link O_o "We're good....well i'm going to bed."
SSK"Same here."
Marth"Yea...I'm calling it a night."
Sonic"See ya."
*All go back to there rooms*
*next morning*
Link"Ok...how much money do we hv Marth?"
Marth"Uuh 178,094,623 dollars."
Link"I'll purchase supplys."
*2hrs later*
Marth"178,094,520 dollars."
Sonic"Well.....hey we should play there."
*Everybody agrees*
SSK"Race ya on go-karts!!"
Link"Your on."
*Played for so long its 5:30pm with 178,093,000*
Link"Movie time!"
*2hrs.30min later*
Marth"Well time to go to the next town."
Link"Errr..why?"
Marth"The stone we got from Dasrium one chapter ago."
Link"Oh...yea....ITS GLOWING BRIGHTLY!!!"
*Shows where the next stone is*
Marth"Better hurry!"
SSK"Why?"
Sonic"*Unwanted Attention*"
SSK"Crap."
*They hide*
Mayor"What was thatz?! thatz waszs *hic* very weirdz."
Citizen"Well whatever it is it must have been our imagination."
*They leave*
SSK"Whew...too close man too close."
Sonic"Yea."
*bush noises*
Marth"We're not alone."
*Grass swordswoman appears*
GrassS."Why don't u give me your stones and I'll make your death swift and painless."
SSK"OKA!!!"
GrassS."Smart move....fatty."
SSK >:( "ITS ON NOW SISTER!!!"
GrassS."Heh....grass vine."
Sonic"YOUR TOO SLOW!!!"
GrassS."Shut up blue rat!"
Unknown"I don't think you wanna say that again if u alreadyknow wat's coming."
GrassS."Who's there?!"
Unknon"Burn!"
GrassS."Aaah!
*jumps*
Where are u?!"
SSK"I swear i kno that voice..."
Unknown"Hehahahaha..."
SSK"Same with the laugh..."
Unknown"Firetoth!!"
SSK"!"
Unknown"Raving Drop."
*jumps back into trees*
Unknown"Get back!!!"
*person in a black coat appears*
GrassS."Who are u?!"
Unknown"Firewall!!!"
GrassS."Aaah!!...grass synthesis!!"
Unknown"Hehahaha...."
GrassS."You'll pay for this!!"
*other black coat guy appears*
Hello!!....are we having fun?"
Unknown"Dude...cut it out."
Unknown"U always ruin the fun..."
*removes hoods*
SSK O_o "Zexion and A-!"
Axel"The name's Axel...got i memorized?"
*SSK draws sword*
Axel"Woa there...take it easy Zexion's changed."
SSK"Proof."
Zexion"Alright...ready...go."
SSK"Thunder Triu!!"
*Zexion matrix side steps*
Zexion"Hmph...."
*goes behind SSK*
*puts him in a hold...lets go...SSK tries to stab him...misses...grabs SSK and takes out a knife*
Zexion"You believe now?"
SSK"Not yet!"
*Zexion pulls out a sword*
SSK"Since when do u use a sword?!"
*jumps*
Zexion"Raving drop."
*SSK winces*
Zexion"Believe now"
SSK"Yea."
Zexion"Use this...only a little...we're running low."
Link"We hv plenty of money."
*goes buy A LOT more herbs*
Zexion"Lets go."
*2 hrs later*
Axel"Well here we are....this town sure is christmasy."
Link"Yea....."
*blizzard*
Marth"A blizzard in 5 seconds?!Something's not right here."
SSK"The stone's flying!"
Zexion"It might lead us to the 3rd stone."
*they follow*
Axel"Well its a cave....well I'll light up the mood."
*1hr 30min later*
SSK"So,how did u two come back?"
Axel"Well its a long story...so we faded back into darkness...and well you might think this is strange but I saw light one day so my "substance" since we're nobodies and since i faded,I went to it and it said "I will make u whole again like if u haven't faded at all."Then the next thing i knew I was whole nobdy wise,but i couldn't summon my chkrams for a short period of time."
SSK"And u Zexion?"
Zexion"Well i was "floating" around and a light came and said"I will give u a second chance."Then,I was "whole",but the light also said"If u do good,then you would be rewarded the thing you want most."
SSK"That is?"
Zexion"Me and Axel would fully exist."
SSK"That's a great reward."
Axel"Here."
*throws SSK something*
SSK"Thanks for the candycane :) "
Axel"Catch.
*gives candycane to the others*
Merry Christmas!!"
Zexion"Well,looks like that's the 3rd stone."
*Axel summons chakrams*
SSK"Why did u summon those?"
Axel"That was too easy...there's gotta be something else to this."
Zexon"Ice is falling!"
Axel"Get back!
*destroys ice*
That should do it."
Link"Hey guys wats thi-"
*disappears*
Marth"Hey guys did u hear someth-"
*disappears*
SSK"Wat was tat Mar-"
*disappears*
Axel"Oh no I'm not going t-"
Zexion"Did u say....something.
*gets out knife*
Ok....where are u.?..."
*water puddle appears...charges behind him*
*turns around*
*2hrs 45 min later*
Axel"Ugh...my head..wat an ice cage??? uhhh too easy!!
*snaps fingers*
Awww 4 the love of......more ice.....
*snaps fingers*
much better i shoulod say..."
*hears something*
*uses Firetooth*
Link"Waaaa!!"
*lands on his head*
Link"Ow."
Axel"Sorry......someone's coming."
Zexion"Axel u can come out now."
Axel"Well your keen sense of smell saved u."
Zexion"Hmph.....u coming Marth?"
Marth"My cape was tangled."
Link"Let's search 4 Sonic and ssk."
*2 hours later*
Axel"There's Sonic and ssk."
Zexion"Well lets go up to the cave again.
*3hrs 15min. later*
Marth"Well here's the village."
Zexion"Well let's ask the mayor."
*30mins later*
MAyor"Hello...please come in you'd freeze out here....*shuts door* so wat business u here?
Axel"Ask u about the cave."
Mayor"Oh...*sighs* she's the reason why the blizzards are harsh."
Zexion"She?"
Mayor"The monster of Mystery Cave.
U...did say ur name was Ax?"
Axel"The name's Axel.....got it memorized?"
Mayor"Well...u need to use a special weapon to defeat her."
ssk"Thank u 4 ur time."
Mayor"Alright.....good luck."
*Leave mayor's house*
Axel"So how bout it Zexion?"
Zexion"It's where we were last time."
*They go back*
*Takes them 4hrs to find the weapon...2hrs to get the weapon...3hrs.30 min to get out oif the Tunnels of Confusion*
Axel"Ok now its the showdown!!"
Link"Ok!!"
*2hrs later*
Zexion"There's the 3rd stine."
Axel"Now time to get ready."
*Everybody draws weapons*
Axel"Alright.*summons chakrams*HERE SHE COMES!!"
BOSS:GIGAICEBLIZZAGAREPRIUM
Zexion"Raving Drop!!"
Link"High Yri!!"
Marth"Dolphin Karfixia!!"
*G.I.B.R. hits the ground...ice comes up from the ground.* *Marth's leg is frozen*
Axel"Get Back!!!! *Marth is free*
ssk"Thunder Triu!!"
G.I.B.R. summons icicles.
Axel"Firetooth!!"
Zexion"Kure ketachsu!!"*throws summoned swords*
Axel"Fire Slide!!"
ssk"Alright we've!!...only penetrated the 1st layer" >.>
Axel"Burn baby!!"
Link"Lusion Furazi!!"
*2nd layer penetrated*
Zexion"A huge amount of ice on the head..if we do enough damage we can use the secret weapon."
ssk"Thunder Getshi!!"
Marth"Dolphin Uppercut!!"
Link"Triforce Rain Drop!!"
*Ice is starting to regenerate*
Sonic"CRAP!!!....Sonic Wind!!"
*Sonic was stuck somehwhere*
Axel"Burn!*Weak point exposed*ssk!!!"
*throws the secret weapon*
ssk"HAAAA!!!" *stabs the head*
*G.I.B.R. explodes*
.........................................................
ssk"Guys?"
Zexion"Right here."
Axel"Here."
Link"Over here."
Sonic"Off my back!!" *gets off*
Marth"Here."
*Zexion picks up the 3rd stone*
Axel"Well time to head to-"
*stone glows and shows them something*
ssk"Well that was helpful.">.>
Link"It just showed us an image."
Marth"Well at least it was well detailed anyway lets go."
*2hrs later*
ssk"WOA...is that Ike and MK fighting?!"
Marth"Sure is!"
Link"Come on!!"
*All get near them*
Ike"Twilight La-!"
*MK drops behind him* *MK stumbles*
Ike"HEAAAA!" *trys to slash him from behind* *MK dodges*
MK"Blane Obliteration" *misses*
Ike"Twilight Bind!!' *MK can't move!!*
Ike"Great Aether!!"
ssk"NOOO STOP!!"
*MK broke halfway*
MK"Crap!!"
Ike"HEAAA!!"
*ssk,Link,and Marth spring into action*
Link"Cut it out Ike!!"
*Ike smashes Link away*
Marth"Dolph-!"
*Ike punches Marth*
ssk"Thunder Getshi!Thunder Triu!!"
Ike"Aether!!"
MK"Rex Trium!!"
*Ike falls to the ground...gets up and uses Euruption on MK*
MK"Da**...."falls*
ssk"Thunder Obliteration!!"
*Ike is hit hard...free of mind control*
Ike"Awww...my head....wat happened?"
ssk"U FREAKIN ALMOST KILLED MK!!!!"
Ike"MK?!....o god....wake up!!...WAKE UP!!
MK"I'M AWAKE I'M FREAKIN AWAKE GEEZ!!!"
Ike"Here."
MK"Its about time."
Zexion"Here use these herbs."
MK"Thx...*pours the whole thing*......much.....be....tt..er."
*Meanwhile*
Smk"GAAA THOSE FREAKIN IDIOTS RUINED MY SPELL!!"
*Back to group*
Axel"Now we should get moving now."
MK"Where r we going?"
ssk"I'll fill u in."

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